The children assembled first,
of course. School was recently over for the summer, and the feeling of liberty
sat uneasily on most of them; they tended to gather together quietly for a
while before they broke into boisterous play. and their talk was still of the
classroom and the teacher, of books and reprimands.
Bobby Martin had already
stuffed his pockets full of stones, and the other boys soon followed his
example, selecting the
smoothest and roundest stones; Bobby and Harry Jones and Dickie Delacroix-- the
villagers pronounced this name "Dellacroy"--eventually made a great
pile of stones in one corner of the square and guarded it against the raids of
the other boys. The girls stood aside, talking among themselves, looking over
their shoulders at rolled in the dust or clung to the hands of their older
brothers or sisters.
Soon the men began to gather,
surveying their own children, speaking of planting and rain, tractors and taxes.
They stood together, away from the pile of stones in the corner, and their
jokes were quiet and they smiled rather than laughed. The women, wearing faded
house dresses and sweaters, came shortly after their menfolk. They greeted one
another and exchanged bits of gossip as they went to join their husbands.
Soon the women, standing by
their husbands, began to call to their children, and the children came reluctantly,
having to be called four or five times. Bobby Martin ducked under his mother's
grasping hand and ran, laughing, back to the pile of stones. His father spoke
up sharply, and Bobby came quickly and took his place between his father and
his oldest brother.
The lottery was conducted--as
were the square dances, the teen club, the Halloween program--by Mr. Summers who
had time and energy to devote to civic activities. He was a round-faced, jovial
man and he ran the coal business, and people were sorry for him because he had
no children and his wife was a scold. When he arrived in the square, carrying
the black wooden box, there was a murmur of conversation among the villagers,
and he waved and called. "Little late today, folks." The postmaster,
Mr. Graves, followed him, carrying a three- legged stool, and the stool was put
in the center of the square and Mr. Summers set the black box down on it. The
villagers kept their distance, leaving a space between themselves and the
stool. and when Mr. Summers said, "Some of you fellows want to give me a
hand?" there was a hesitation before two men. Mr. Martin and his oldest
son, Baxter. came forward to hold the box steady on the stool while Mr. Summers
stirred up the papers inside it.
The original paraphernalia
for the lottery had been lost long ago, and the black box now resting on the stool
had been put into use even before Old Man Warner, the oldest man in town, was
born. Mr. Summers spoke frequently to the villagers about making a new box, but
no one liked to upset even as much tradition as was represented by the black
box. There was a story that the present box had been made with some pieces of
the box that had preceded it, the one that had been constructed when the first people
settled down to make a village here. Every year, after the lottery, Mr. Summers
began talking again about a new box, but every year the subject was allowed to
fade off without anything's being done.
The black box grew shabbier
each year: by now it was no longer completely black but splintered badly along
one side to show the original wood color, and in some places faded or stained.
Mr. Martin and his oldest
son, Baxter, held the black box securely on the stool until Mr. Summers had stirred
the papers thoroughly with his hand. Because so much of the ritual had been
forgotten or discarded, Mr. Summers had been successful in having slips of
paper substituted for the chips of wood that had been used for generations.
Chips of wood, Mr. Summers had argued. had been all very well when the village
was tiny, but now that the population was more than three hundred and likely to
keep on growing, it was necessary to use something that would fit more easily
into he black box. The night before the lottery, Mr. Summers and Mr. Graves
made up the slips of paper and put them in the box, and it was
then taken to the safe of Mr.
Summers' coal company and locked up until Mr. Summers was ready to take it to the
square next morning. The rest of the year, the box was put way, sometimes one
place, sometimes another; it had spent one year in Mr. Graves's barn and
another year underfoot in the post office and sometimes it was set on a shelf
in the Martin grocery and left there.
There was a great deal of
fussing to be done before Mr. Summers declared the lottery open. There were the
lists to make up--of heads of families. heads of households in each family.
members of each household in each family. There was the proper swearing-in of
Mr. Summers by the postmaster, as the official of the lottery; at one time,
some people remembered, there had been a recital of some sort, performed by the
official of the lottery, a perfunctory. tuneless chant that had been rattled
off duly each year; some people believed that the official of the lottery used
to stand just so when he said or sang it, others believed that he was supposed
to walk among the people, but years and years ago this part of the ritual had
been allowed to lapse. There had been, also, a ritual salute, which the
official of the lottery had had to use in addressing each person who came up to
draw from the box, but this also had changed with time, until now it was felt
necessary only for the official to speak to each person approaching. Mr. Summers
was very good at all this; in his clean white shirt and blue jeans. with one
hand resting carelessly on the black box. he seemed very proper and important
as he talked interminably to Mr. Graves and the Martins.
Just as Mr. Summers finally
left off talking and turned to the assembled villagers, Mrs. Hutchinson came hurriedly
along the path to the square, her sweater thrown over her shoulders, and slid
into place in the back of the crowd. "Clean forgot what day it was,"
she said to Mrs. Delacroix, who stood next to her, and they both laughed
softly. "Thought my old man was out back stacking wood," Mrs.
Hutchinson went on. "and then I looked out the window and the kids was
gone, and then I remembered it was the twenty-seventh and came a-running."
She dried her hands on her apron, and Mrs. Delacroix said, "You're in
time, though. They're still talking away up there."
Mrs. Hutchinson craned her
neck to see through the crowd and found her husband and children standing near
the front. She tapped Mrs. Delacroix on the arm as a farewell and began to make
her way through the crowd. The people separated good-humoredly to let her
through: two or three people said. in voices just loud enough to be heard
across the crowd, "Here comes your, Missus, Hutchinson," and
"Bill, she made it after all." Mrs. Hutchinson reached her husband,
and Mr. Summers, who had been waiting, said cheerfully. "Thought we were
going to have to get on without you, Tessie." Mrs. Hutchinson said, grinning,
"Wouldn't have me leave m'dishes in the sink, now, would you. Joe?,"
and soft laughter ran through the crowd as the people stirred back into
position after Mrs. Hutchinson's arrival.
"Well, now." Mr.
Summers said soberly, "guess we better get started, get this over with,
so's we can go back to work. Anybody ain't here?"
"Dunbar." several
people said. "Dunbar. Dunbar."
Mr. Summers consulted his
list. "Clyde Dunbar." he said. "That's right. He's broke his
leg, hasn't he? Who's drawing for him?"
"Me. I guess," a
woman said. and Mr. Summers turned to look at her. "Wife draws for her
husband." Mr. Summers said. "Don't you have a grown boy to do it for
you, Janey?" Although Mr. Summers and everyone else in the village knew
the answer perfectly well, it was the business of the official of the lottery
to ask such questions formally. Mr. Summers waited with an expression of polite
interest while Mrs. Dunbar answered.
"Horace's not but
sixteen vet." Mrs. Dunbar said regretfully. "Guess I gotta fill in
for the old man this year."
"Right." Sr.
Summers said. He made a note on the list he was holding. Then he asked,
"Watson boy drawing this year?"
A tall boy in the crowd
raised his hand. "Here," he said. "I'm drawing for my mother and
me." He blinked his eyes nervously and ducked his head as several voices
in the crowd said things like "Good fellow, Jack." and "Glad to
see your mother's got a man to do it."
"Well," Mr. Summers
said, "guess that's everyone. Old Man Warner make it?"
"Here," a voice
said. and Mr. Summers nodded.
A sudden hush fell on the
crowd as Mr. Summers cleared his throat and looked at the list. "All ready?"
he called. "Now, I'll read the names--heads of families first--and the men
come up and take a paper out of the box. Keep the paper folded in your hand
without looking at it until everyone has had a turn. Everything clear?"
The people had done it so many
times that they only half listened to the directions: most of them were quiet.
wetting their lips. not looking around. Then Mr. Summers raised one hand high
and said, "Adams."
A man disengaged himself from
the crowd and came forward. "Hi. Steve." Mr. Summers said. and Mr. Adams
said. "Hi. Joe." They grinned at one another humorlessly and
nervously. Then Mr. Adams reached into the black box and took out a folded
paper. He held it firmly by one corner as he turned and went hastily back to
his place in the crowd where he stood a little apart from his family not
looking down at his hand.
"Allen." Mr.
Summers said. "Anderson.... Bentham."
"Seems like there's no
time at all between lotteries any more." Mrs. Delacroix said to Mrs.
Graves in the back row.
"Seems like we got
through with the last one only last week."
"Time sure goes fast.--
Mrs. Graves said.
"Clark....
Delacroix"
"There goes my old
man." Mrs. Delacroix said. She held her breath while her husband went
forward.
"Dunbar," Mr.
Summers said, and Mrs. Dunbar went steadily to the box while one of the women
said.
"Go on. Janey," and
another said, "There she goes."
"We're next." Mrs.
Graves said. She watched while Mr. Graves came around from the side of the box,
greeted Mr. Summers gravely and selected a slip of paper from the box. By now,
all through the crowd there were men holding the small folded papers in their
large hand. turning them over and over nervously Mrs. Dunbar and her two sons
stood together, Mrs. Dunbar holding the slip of paper.
"Harburt....
Hutchinson."
"Get up there,
Bill," Mrs. Hutchinson said. and the people near her laughed.
"Jones."
"They do say," Mr.
Adams said to Old Man Warner, who stood next to him, "that over in the
north village they're talking of giving up the lottery."
Old Man Warner snorted.
"Pack of crazy fools," he said. "Listening to the young folks,
nothing's good enough for them. Next thing you know, they'll be wanting to go
back to living in caves, nobody work any more, live that way for a while. Used
to be a saying about 'Lottery in June, corn be heavy soon.' First thing you
know, we'd all be eating stewed chickweed and acorns. There's always been a
lottery," he added petulantly. "Bad enough to see young Joe Summers
up there joking with everybody."
"Some places have
already quit lotteries." Mrs. Adams said.
"Nothing but trouble in
that," Old Man Warner said stoutly. "Pack of young fools."
"Martin." And Bobby
Martin watched his father go forward. "Overdyke.... Percy."
"I wish they'd
hurry," Mrs. Dunbar said to her older son. "I wish they'd
hurry."
"They're almost through,"
her son said.
"You get ready to run
tell Dad," Mrs. Dunbar said.
Mr. Summers called his own
name and then stepped forward precisely and selected a slip from the box. Then
he called, "Warner."
"Seventy-seventh year I
been in the lottery," Old Man Warner said as he went through the crowd.
"Seventy-seventh
time."
"Watson" The tall
boy came awkwardly through the crowd. Someone said, "Don't be nervous,
Jack," and Mr. Summers said, "Take your time, son."
"Zanini."
After that, there was a long
pause, a breathless pause, until Mr. Summers. holding his slip of paper in the air,
said, "All right, fellows." For a minute, no one moved, and then all
the slips of paper were opened.
Suddenly, all the women began
to speak at once, saving. "Who is it?," "Who's got it?,"
"Is it the
Dunbars?," "Is it
the Watsons?" Then the voices began to say, "It's Hutchinson. It's
Bill," "Bill
Hutchinson's got it."
"Go tell your
father," Mrs. Dunbar said to her older son.
People began to look around
to see the Hutchinsons. Bill Hutchinson was standing quiet, staring down at the
paper in his hand. Suddenly. Tessie Hutchinson shouted to Mr. Summers.
"You didn't give him time enough to take any paper he wanted. I saw you.
It wasn't fair!"
"Be a good sport,
Tessie." Mrs. Delacroix called, and Mrs. Graves said, "All of us took
the same chance."
"Shut up, Tessie,"
Bill Hutchinson said.
"Well, everyone,"
Mr. Summers said, "that was done pretty fast, and now we've got to be
hurrying a little more to get done in time." He consulted his next list.
"Bill," he said, "you draw for the Hutchinson family. You got
any other households in the Hutchinsons?"
"There's Don and Eva,"
Mrs. Hutchinson yelled. "Make them take their chance!"
"Daughters draw with
their husbands' families, Tessie," Mr. Summers said gently. "You know
that as well as anyone else."
"It wasn't fair,"
Tessie said.
"I guess not, Joe."
Bill Hutchinson said regretfully. "My daughter draws with her husband's
family; that's only fair. And I've got no other family except the kids."
"Then, as far as drawing
for families is concerned, it's you," Mr. Summers said in explanation,
"and as far as drawing for households is concerned, that's you, too.
Right?"
"Right," Bill
Hutchinson said.
"How many kids,
Bill?" Mr. Summers asked formally.
"Three," Bill
Hutchinson said.
"There's Bill, Jr., and
Nancy, and little Dave. And Tessie and me."
"All right, then,"
Mr. Summers said. "Harry, you got their tickets back?"
Mr. Graves nodded and held up
the slips of paper. "Put them in the box, then," Mr. Summers
directed. "Take Bill's and put it in."
"I think we ought to
start over," Mrs. Hutchinson said, as quietly as she could. "I tell
you it wasn't fair. You didn't give him time enough to choose. Everybody saw
that."
Mr. Graves had selected the
five slips and put them in the box. and he dropped all the papers but those onto
the ground where the breeze caught them and lifted them off.
"Listen,
everybody," Mrs. Hutchinson was saying to the people around her.
"Ready, Bill?" Mr.
Summers asked. and Bill Hutchinson, with one quick glance around at his wife
and children, nodded.
"Remember," Mr.
Summers said, "take the slips and keep them folded until each person has
taken one. Harry, you help little Dave." Mr. Graves took the hand of the
little boy, who came willingly with him up to the box. "Take a paper out
of the box, Davy." Mr. Summers said. Davy put his hand into the box and laughed.
"Take just one paper." Mr. Summers said. "Harry, you hold it for
him." Mr. Graves took the child's hand and removed the folded paper from
the tight fist and held it while little Dave stood next to him and looked up at
him wonderingly.
"Nancy next," Mr.
Summers said. Nancy was twelve, and her school friends breathed heavily as she
went forward switching her skirt, and took a slip daintily from the box
"Bill, Jr.," Mr. Summers said, and Billy, his face red and his feet
overlarge, near knocked the box over as he got a paper out. "Tessie,"
Mr. Summers said. She hesitated for a minute, looking around defiantly, and
then set her lips and went up to the box. She snatched a paper out and held it
behind her.
"Bill," Mr. Summers
said, and Bill Hutchinson reached into the box and felt around, bringing his
hand out at last with the slip of paper in it.
The crowd was quiet. A girl
whispered, "I hope it's not Nancy," and the sound of the whisper
reached the edges of the crowd.
"It's not the way it
used to be." Old Man Warner said clearly. "People ain't the way they
used to be."
"All right," Mr.
Summers said. "Open the papers. Harry, you open little Dave's."
Mr. Graves opened the slip of
paper and there was a general sigh through the crowd as he held it up and everyone
could see that it was blank. Nancy and Bill. Jr. opened theirs at the same
time. and both beamed and laughed, turning around to the crowd and holding
their slips of paper above their heads.
"Tessie," Mr.
Summers said. There was a pause, and then Mr. Summers looked at Bill
Hutchinson, and Bill unfolded his paper and showed it. It was blank.
"It's Tessie," Mr.
Summers said, and his voice was hushed. "Show us her paper. Bill."
Bill Hutchinson went over to
his wife and forced the slip of paper out of her hand. It had a black spot on it,
the black spot Mr. Summers had made the night before with the heavy pencil in
the coal company office. Bill Hutchinson held it up, and there was a stir in
the crowd.
"All right, folks."
Mr. Summers said. "Let's finish quickly."
Although the villagers had
forgotten the ritual and lost the original black box, they still remembered to use
stones. The pile of stones the boys had made earlier was ready; there were
stones on the ground with the blowing scraps of paper that had come out of the
box. Mrs. Delacroix selected a stone so large she had to pick it up with both
hands and turned to Mrs. Dunbar. "Come on," she said. "Hurry
up."
Mrs. Dunbar had small stones
in both hands and she said, gasping for breath, "I can't run at all.
You'll have to go ahead and I'll catch up with you."
The children had stones
already. And someone gave little Davy Hutchinson few pebbles.
Tessie Hutchinson was in the
center of a cleared space by now, and she held her hands out desperately as the
villagers moved in on her. "It isn't fair," she said. A stone hit her
on the side of the head. Old Man Warner was saying, "Come on, come on,
everyone." Steve Adams was in the front of the crowd of villagers, with
Mrs. Graves beside him.
"It isn't fair, it isn't
right," Mrs. Hutchinson screamed, and then they were upon her.
POV:Well this was a turn of events. I like this story because its misleading. In our society the word "lottery" is used differently, its basically a game of chance where you put out money to buy tickets hoping they would pick your numbers at random. In the story the lottery is an event but instead of winning money you get stoned to death. this story is kind of crazy because why would people gather around and want to stone someone who has probably never done anything, and also allowing their kids to participate in this. why do they still keep the tradition around if so many aspects of the tradition has been forgotten or disregarded. The town only has 300 people so they must all know each other so its like killing their own friends and or even family. What do they do with the body after they kill the person, and are they suppose to just carry on with there lives after that?
ReplyDeleteThis story was crazy, completely unexpected ending. The entire time I was wondering why people were scared to win, but now I understand that they don't win anything but a slow painful death. Old Man Warner did have me convinced that the lottery should stay, until he was yelling at everyone to stone Mrs. Hutchinson. The story left me shocked and speechless. I'm still at a loss for words to completely describe how I feel.
ReplyDeleteThe lottery was such a great story; it had such a wicked ending. In this story I thought that everyone was going to go to a lottery such as the ones we have where people win money. As the story continued I realized people didn't want to win which is the crazy thing I thought to myself why you would not want to win money! As the story started to close I understood why no one wanted to win. The unfortunate person who won the lottery was stoned to death. That was when I had to reread the beginning of the story and I remembered that the story said the kids and families collected all the stones they could. This story is one of the best short stories I have ever read, I am still in shock at how the story ended. I just wonder at why other cities or towns stopped doing the lottery? If it was tradition then why did they break it?
ReplyDeleteThis story was very intriguing. I found that the beginning gave me a sense that the lottery aspect was how most people perceive it to be. When it described the collecting of stones, I thought the children would use those to skip rocks. By the end, I questioned what exactly I had just read. It certainly took me by surprise. I had numerous questions about the concept. It said that their concept of the lottery had been older than the oldest man, or at least the box was. This raises the question if the purpose solves any problem. Could they be doing this because of some problem they have presently? Or is it a merely a counter-productive process that might have had a purpose many years ago? With the amount of families that were called, it seems like a pretty close knit community. No wonder other towns have abandoned the idea of randomly selecting a person to be stoned by their friends and family. This has got to be one of the greatest short stories I have read. The surprise ending really catches you off guard. I have passed this story on so others may get to enjoy this fine read.
ReplyDeleteThe Lottery was one of the best stories I have read. It was very interesting and had you thinking about the story from the very beginning. I thought it was going to be a normal, old story about some lucky person winning the lottery and becoming rich. The best part about the story for me was the unexpected ending. I had no clue that the lottery was not something that everyone wants to win like In our society, but something that everyone wants to lose. That was the irony in the story as well. I also found it to be a bit violent, just as the other stories I have read this week. In the beginning, the stones that were collected and brought together were a mystery to me because I had no idea what they really needed them for. At first I thought maybe they were used for the children to play with and throw when the lottery was finished. But I finally got my questioned answered by the end of the story when the winner of the lottery gets to be stoned to death. Although, I still don’t understand why this tradition exists within the village. Whether it was for population control or just plain unlucky people every year, we may never know.
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